Ch 25 · Lesson 8

Sequencing past tenses: the story clock

In a story the moves the clock on, the imparfait holds it still and the -- goes back: , , .

The short version

Every past story runs on one clock

, .

When I arrived, everyone had left.
Why?

A past narrative has a 'now' of its own. Events on that line are , the scenery around them is imparfait, and anything that had already happened before it is --. , : one event, one background, one earlier event. Decide where the clock is and the tenses follow.

A French story runs three past tenses at once, and each has one job. The moves the story on, the imparfait holds it still, and the -- steps back to something already over.

The three jobs on one screen

imparfait, the scenepassé composé, the eventplus-que-parfait, before thatWhat do the colours mean?
TenseIts jobExample
imparfaitholds the story still .
moves the story on .
plus--goes back before the scene .
  • . - It was raining.
  • . - A car stopped.
  • . - She had forgotten her coat.
  • elle avait oublié son manteau (before the scene)

  • il pleuvait (the scene, still)

  • une voiture s’est arrêtée (event 1)

  • son frère a baissé la vitre (event 2)

Timeline from past to now, with now marked.

Each tense on its own is on its own page: passé composé or imparfait and the plus-que-parfait. This page puts them in one paragraph.

The story clock

imparfait, the scenepassé composé, the eventplus-que-parfait, before thatWhat do the colours mean?

Picture a clock running through your story. Every verb does one of three things to it.

The story...TenseExample
moves on .
stands stillimparfait .
goes backplus-- .

String ten imperfects together and the story has not moved at all. Three verbs are three ticks of the clock: , , . - She went out, took the bus and arrived.

A first story, annotated

imparfait, the scenepassé composé, the eventplus-que-parfait, before thatWhat do the colours mean?

Read the French line by line, and watch the clock column.

ClockFrenchEnglish
still .It was eight and raining.
stillMarie .Marie had been waiting.
back .She had forgotten her coat.
moves , .Suddenly a car stopped.
still .It was her brother.
moves .He wound down the window.
moves .She got into the car.

The first three lines move nothing. French is happy to open on a scene and let it sit; a story that fires a from the first line reads like a police statement.

sits in the middle of the action and is still imparfait: who it was is a state, not an event.

Going further: Signal words, and quand and the rest of the guide, when you want them. This lesson does not need them.

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